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Gaming Haiku #5: Red Ring of Death

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Tuesday, May 12, 2009

(I write this Gaming Haiku to make light of my painful "situation")

 

now you know the game!

eight-hundred four my xbox

you taste the red ring

 

red ring, it will sting

 

-klink

 
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Chris "Cosmo" Ross
May 13, 2009
Your first line has six syllables, otherwise, it's great.
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Michael Pangelina
May 13, 2009
I'm pretty sure that's only five syllables there in the first line.
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Andrew Wilson
May 13, 2009
The first line is five syllables. Now can you come up with a haiku for the 360's next big hardware failure, the E74 error?
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Chris "Cosmo" Ross
May 14, 2009
Actually guys, the word "our" has two syllables.
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Matt Clinkscales
May 14, 2009
edited for J. Cosmo Cohen: our->the sorry, I'm from Texas

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