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Sunday, July 18, 2010

I remember reading an article on Bitmob, probably about a year ago now, talking about how to succeed as a freelance video game writer.  I actually think someone put it on 1UP to help everyone out because at the time that site was looking for freelancers, and I read it there.  I studied the tips, and made sure, after long hours of editing, that I did not make any of the fatal errors the article said to avoid.  

The piece I submitted was a review of Legion: Online Movie Game.  At the time, I had no job, no money, and no video games except the original Starcraft, which I seriously considered reviewing despite it's age.  But advertisements for Legion were all over 1UP's site, so I thought maybe the editor would appreciate a review of it.  You can check it out here:  http://www.1up.com/do/blogEntry?bId=9016554

Nothing came from it; all I did was drive myself a little insane from working on it too long.  In college, I used to do the same thing, spending long hours scrutinizing every sentence to make sure I was submitting the best writing I was capable of.  Believe it or not, there are people out there who will actually tell you to do this!  Teachers, editors, friends, all of whom mean well, will tell you to scrutinize every word on the page, to edit and re-edit, to have someone read your work and give insightful feedback.

I'm here to say don't listen to them!  

Don't scrutinize anything, don't edit anything, and don't let anyone read your work until it's finished.  Trust yourself!  Every heart vibrates to that iron string.  (Emerson)  

The idea here is basically that your going to write some bad stuff... it's inevitable.  So why not just post it, let us all know your human, and move on?  I can say from experience that it's strangely liberating to post a bad article, especially incomplete ones.  It makes me feel free, like the work doesn't own me.  *I should say, however, that I have yet to get paid for my writing*

But my argument is healthy trumps successful... To Be Continued...     

 
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Comments (5)
Brett_new_profile
July 19, 2010


Whoa whoa whoa -- don't edit? That's one of the most essential tools you have at your disposal! You can bet Ralph Waldo Emerson went through multiple drafts of everything he wrote.



If you're going crazy staring at your own work, I'd suggest giving it to someone else to read over. Sometimes you can get too close to your own work; an outside perspective will help you notice things you hadn't noticed yourself.


Dan__shoe__hsu_-_square
July 19, 2010


I hear what you're saying, but think about it this way: You might have a great idea or vision to put down on paper, a computer screen, a canvas, film, whatever. But if it's all raw, and technical errors or poor pacing or grammatical errors get in the way, then the reader/viewer/whatever may never get your true message...distracted by all the problems.



Don't *over*edit...sure. But there's a reason why nearly every medium has editors. :)  Good luck!


July 19, 2010


Let us all know my human what?!



Editing should be more like combing your hair than cutting it. All the technique in the world won't make up for a lack of heart -- just as all heart and no art makes article something something. It's a balance, like most things.


Stoylogosmall
July 19, 2010


As an aspiring author (I have a fully completed novel I'm trying to find a publisher for) and an avid writer on Bitmob, I agree with you! But I think your point didn't get across well enough. I think the message was, that never be shy or timid about your own writing, because if you're constantly editing and editing and EDITING AND EDITING, your work will either...



1: Never be completed because you're constantly working on it.



2: May lose that initial spark/meaning you had for the work in the first place.



I write about things I feel about at a certain moment in time, that's when my best stuff comes out. Sure I may have to fix a few errors and sentence structure, but that's a given. I think what Ryan is trying to get at guys is don't become overconsumed with editing and scrutinizing your own work. Become enveloped into what you wrote about in the first place instead of polishing it a hundred thousand times before submiting it.


Me
July 19, 2010


Those are all great comments... they make me think maybe I should start editing again, at least a little.


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